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Old 02-09-2016, 04:18 PM   #11
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Just read through section 1.1. Pretty good. In some places, the English is technically correct but just a little bit off. If wanted, I can give my suggestions.
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Just my suggestions for the intro. Red is stuff I removed. Blue is stuff I added. Feel free to take all or none of my suggestions.
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Old 02-09-2016, 05:42 PM   #13
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Thanks for the manual, just bought this aircraft (together with the MiG-15) and was getting scared you guys forgot about this baby

Any chance of a campaign in the future?
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Just my suggestions for the intro. Red is stuff I removed. Blue is stuff I added. Feel free to take all or none of my suggestions.
Thank you very much. Please check updated document in first post.

If you want, please keep your suggestions coming. As far as I know, mostly non-native English speakers have been involved in creating the document, so feedback like yours is extremely valuable and welcome.
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Looks great!

Would it be possible to get a version of this that uses primarily feet/nautical miles/knots/lbm/lbf as they are the units in the F-86 instruments?
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Thank you very much. Please check updated document in first post.

If you want, please keep your suggestions coming. As far as I know, mostly non-native English speakers have been involved in creating the document, so feedback like yours is extremely valuable and welcome.
Glad to help.
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Old 02-10-2016, 02:42 PM   #17
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My suggestions for chapter 1-1.
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My suggestions for chapter 1-1.
Thanks again. See updated document.
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My suggestions for chapter 1-2.
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My suggestions for chapter 1-2.
Thanks - please check updated document.

Also see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United...rmy_Air_Forces
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