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Old 02-12-2016, 06:10 PM   #21
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ok. I'll keep that in mind.
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Old 02-15-2016, 07:35 PM   #22
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My suggestions for chapter 1.3. I noticed in some chapters, imperial units are used while metric units are used in others. Since F-86 is American, maybe imperial units should be used but I'd say consistency is more important (all imperial or all metric). Just a thought.
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Old 02-15-2016, 09:14 PM   #23
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My suggestions for chapter 1.3. I noticed in some chapters, imperial units are used while metric units are used in others. Since F-86 is American, maybe imperial units should be used but I'd say consistency is more important (all imperial or all metric). Just a thought.
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In 1952, the manufacturing facility in Inglewood (California) started the assembly of the F-86F-35 (NA-202(191)). A total of 157 (263) airframes of this modification were built.
I will ask, but here's how I understand it:

907x NA-191 (F-86F-30 and −35 blocks, 263 F-86F-35)
157x NA-202 (F-86F-35 block)

(I could not quickly locate a source for the number 263, however. Maybe someone else can?)
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Old 02-20-2016, 02:22 PM   #24
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If you need help, you can read my unofficial Spanish manual, I used official documents to make it.

Your manual has a similar format to mine.

http://forums.eagle.ru/showthread.php?t=143714

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Suggestions for chapter 1.4.
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Just did a quick skim of 1.5 since it's mostly a table. My only comment is all 'thousands' should have commas ... 1,234 ... 2,468 etc.
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Suggestions for chapter 2. Mostly just added / removed commas. Also, make sure 'thousands' have commas.
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Just did a quick skim of 1.5 since it's mostly a table. My only comment is all 'thousands' should have commas ... 1,234 ... 2,468 etc.
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Suggestions for chapter 2. Mostly just added / removed commas. Also, make sure 'thousands' have commas.
Thanks, please review updated document.
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Thanks, please review updated document.
Looks good. 2 small things. On page 23, should say "Mig-15s", not "Mig-15". On page 31, should say "9,000 F-86s", not "9,000 F-86".
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Looks good. 2 small things. On page 23, should say "Mig-15s", not "Mig-15". On page 31, should say "9,000 F-86s", not "9,000 F-86".
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