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:helpsmilie: I need your help. :helpsmilie:

 

It's already the sixth of April, so please take this thread seriously. :music_whistling:

 

We apologize for the new delays concerning our UH-1 Caucasus Campaign. Unfortioned with the experience made in the past five months it is getting unlikely that there is a release in 2019. :(

 

 

Because of some spelling issues, ED is unable to process the campaign.

After we get all the paperwork checked by a retired CIA Field Officer (many thanks for that), we get yesterday informed by Nine Line that there are one or more spelling issues in our Offical Video. :cry:

 

I am obviously unable to identify that threat to air safety. So please take a look at the video and identify the problem.

 

 

The Boing fiasco in mind. For the safety of all test pilots, ED will not start practical tests of the missions as long as there are any issues with the documentation.

 

 

We are also looking for assistance regarding upcoming projects ( more Campaigns and even some free Missions for the community we are already working on).

 

I am very thankful for any indication or help. :helpsmilie:

 

Please contact me in the forum, or on info@low-level-heaven.de


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Always happy landings ;)

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hello CHPL

 

 

 

Looks great

 

 

observations only......

 

 

 

 

More than 140 pages of mission documentation

(in the)

And of course, a whole lot of fun

Hope this helps

 

 

 

 

Thanks a lot Dispatch !! :thumbup:

 

That was fast.:pilotfly::pilotfly:

Always happy landings ;)

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Why don't you just ask NineLine for what spelling issues the project is delayed?

 

Hey Lino

 

You can be sure that was our first thought as well.

 

"Ask the community for help".

 

No need to explain or comment on any communication skills :smilewink:

Always happy landings ;)

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Dispatch seems to have caught them - looks fun :-)

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Nice.

A few observations, just my opinions and not a criticism.:thumbup:

BTW I didn't have sound on, so some of the points below may not be relative.

 

 

 

0.23 patrol infrastructure - patrol civil infrastructure

visual check - visually check

0:32 accent - accents

0:41 suggest change to plot driven story line or story driven campaign

1.32 more than 140 pages of mission documentation

2:15 and of course a whole lot of

 

 

Suggest use of sentence case rather that using 'Caps Through the Sentence' just for continuity.

 

 

I look forward to flying your campaign! :)

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Nice.

A few observations, just my opinions and not a criticism.:thumbup:

BTW I didn't have sound on, so some of the points below may not be relative.

 

 

 

0.23 patrol infrastructure - patrol civil infrastructure

visual check - visually check

0:32 accent - accents

0:41 suggest change to plot driven story line or story driven campaign

1.32 more than 140 pages of mission documentation

2:15 and of course a whole lot of

 

 

Suggest use of sentence case rather that using 'Caps Through the Sentence' just for continuity.

 

 

I look forward to flying your campaign! :)

 

 

 

Thank you very much :thumbup:

 

I love this community there is always a wingman if you need one :thumbup::pilotfly:

Always happy landings ;)

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If you are going to redo the captions for the video ... you might perhaps want to reconsider the typography as well. I.e. use not so many different - and not so "fancy" fonts. I'd stay rather conservative ("classy" ^^) with the fonts I'd use.

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Hey CHPL. I see you got it taken care of. I’m new to DCS. I just started flying 3 weeks ago. So much good, free info on these threads. You said that you would need future help and I would gladly help proof the translations. Send me a PM next time. There is so much good stuff here I feel guilty for not having contributed anything yet.

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Hey CHPL. I see you got it taken care of. I’m new to DCS. I just started flying 3 weeks ago. So much good, free info on these threads. You said that you would need future help and I would gladly help proof the translations. Send me a PM next time. There is so much good stuff here I feel guilty for not having contributed anything yet.

 

That's great thank you :thumbup:

 

And welcome in DCS

 

What kind of aircraft do you start flying?

Always happy landings ;)

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i can't wait untill 2020. i can be a tester, and i can pay it

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i can't wait untill 2020. i can be a tester, and i can pay it

 

Really hope that ED did not go that way.

All missions tested several times and finished in 2018. There may be only still the one or the other spelling issue in the Radio menus and they are intended, because of Germans in real life only 99% perfect.:music_whistling: :doh:

Always happy landings ;)

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do you need help on the 140 page manual?

 

Many thanks,

 

The manual is already fixed since December :smilewink:

 

But I will give you a call when the next campaign is a few steps further.

Always happy landings ;)

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